When I woke up this morning to hear my little baby Romeo crying it made me think bout when I was like little and I weren’t famous. Life was well hard and there was no1 there for me! What kept me going was my dance. I used to luv 2 dance and I still do cos I can like express myself and show how meaningful I can be, through my movement. During my dance lessons and @ clubs we were told that we had to loose wait. I suppose that it where my next major problem in my life started.Anorexia the thing that would change me forever. It made me into a stick and nearly killed me. But like, I realised that my family were still here to help me and teach me. They wanted me to live and so did my friends! Me dying would have probably caused a mass suicide so in the end living was better! ALSO if I’d have died then, then I’d have never met David, the luv of my life, my husband. Through him I had Brooklyn and my gorgeous new baby Romeo.David has been a tower of strength for me to lean on! Through all my problems he’s been at my side teaching me what he knows! Showing me more intellectual ways of thinking cos he is like well clever. I don’t understand why people put him down and say he’s stupid because he ain’t! He’s lovely and bright and SOOOOO good at football.Before David I had my four closest friends: Mel B (scary spice), Mel C (Sporty spice), Emma (baby spice) and Geri (ginger spice). We were in our little house together learning to sing and dance all these hard routines. There was NOT enough space for my make-up or general cosmetics. A girl has to have the essentials. Due to my acne scars from when I was a teenager I had to have my cover-up and foundation! I loved the days of the Spice Girls! They were my other sisters. But the trauma I went through when Geri left was horrific! I couldn’t cope again! Then I found David. I know I say it loads and he ain’t gonna read this but I luv him!But the truth about the Spice girls which I would never tell anyone! I was getting overshadowed (log word WOW) and I’m better off on my own! Pursuing my solo career has let me expand my music to more in-depth and like interesting points + I got to do some writing which was great cos I could express myself even more! I feel expressing yourself is one of the most important things. I mean my book “Learning to Fly” shows all the troubles I went through as an adolescent. (Acne, anorexia to name but 2) Also it shows people the real me. And seen, as they love me they should know all about their idols and I think after reading the book they will love me even more. Cos David, Brooklyn and Romeo all do!CommentaryStyle.By using simple vocabulary it played on the fact of Victoria Beckham’s supposed lack of intelligence. I repeated several times the phrase “express myself.” To show she feels that all her work is portraying her. Which in turn seems quite self-centred. Also that she thinks all people want to hear her way of thinking.Then also I bought up her love for David because in almost every interview she states her love towards him. Which I believe is true but slightly over announced.I used the wrong version of the word weight to show that her intelligence is lacking also and that she could not tell the difference between the two.Then also by spelling some things how they sound e.g. luv.ContentMy aim for describing Victoria was to add to her lack of intelligence and show how self-centred she is. This was done by all the paragraphs talking about her life history and her life at the present.Victoria Beckham has had problems with acne and anorexia, which caused her major inconvenience, and by adding them I felt it showed that she is also a normal person with regular teenage problems and that she did have to do something for her fame. She lived in a house for a few years with the other members of the spice girls to fulfil dreams. Which even if you do not like the music I find admirable.Victoria Beckham’s life has hardly been easy and by thinking about all she has been through I find that she has lead one of the most interesting lives out of almost all people. Yet there are many points about her that are criticisable. E.g. her lack of intelligence, she cannot sing well, and is not a particularly good mother. So again proving she is more normal than it appears.